being such a tiny olive in a garden variety
but manic panic is the issue now
break through to behind the lens
where a rumor mill lays working overtime
you know how to kill with kindness
but don’t
shock therapy is the head case
the design for humanity
still trying to assemble the atomic jigsaw of life
for the sweet escape
when surrealism finally enters
along with its neon brights
blackout takes over
in the masterpiece theatre.
I wrote a poem for school, but i need a good title...any ideas??
what about pattern of perfection?
Reply:What life is like on the other side
Reply:wat is it about
Reply:ATOMIC JIGSAW OF LIFE
Reply:I like the poem! But I can't think of very good titles. Maybe something about being lost in a gallery? Or a metaphor about painting?
'Brushstrokes' or 'Labyrinth'
Reply:jigsaw of life
Reply:THE MASTERPIECE OF THE THEATER.
Reply:Modemism
First word or last line always sounds good ;]
Reply:The Art of Living?
Reply:Very nice poem. Try to make the poem title based on the main idea of the poem.
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